Plot Summary
Summer Meltdown Begins
Fallon, a responsible, movie-obsessed teen, works at her mom's quirky, romance-themed ice cream truck, Love at First Bite. Her best friend Jami is about to leave for theater camp, and Fallon is dreading the return of Chloe—her ex-best friend, ex-almost-girlfriend, and the daughter of her mom's business partner. The two girls haven't spoken since a disastrous hookup the previous summer, and Fallon is determined to avoid Chloe at all costs. But with family obligations, a looming road trip, and the need to pay back Jami for a Montreal trip, Fallon's plans for a drama-free summer are already melting.
Exes, Ice Cream, and Avoidance
Chloe returns from college, and the tension is immediate. Both girls are forced to work together in the truck, and their unresolved feelings simmer beneath every interaction. Fallon's attempts to avoid Chloe are complicated by their mothers' intertwined lives and the financial pressures of the family business. Fallon's friends, Jami and Prisha, try to support her, but the emotional wounds from last summer's failed romance are still raw. The girls' history—best friends, then more, then nothing—haunts every scoop and every shift.
The Bonfire That Changed Everything
Fallon recalls the pivotal bonfire party: Chloe's going-away celebration before college. What started as a night of laughter and nostalgia ended with the two girls hooking up in a tent—Fallon's first time, and a moment she thought would change everything. Instead, Chloe left for college the next day, and their friendship imploded. The pain of that night, and the silence that followed, shapes Fallon's reluctance to reconnect.
Road Trip Ultimatum
When a business emergency arises, Fallon and Chloe are tasked with driving the ice cream truck to a high-stakes food festival in Memphis, then on to Dallas. Their mothers, desperate to save the business, insist the girls work together. Fallon is furious but can't say no—her family's livelihood is at stake. The road trip becomes a crucible: two ex-friends, one truck, and hundreds of miles of unresolved feelings.
Shark Tent Standoff
The first night on the road, Fallon insists on sleeping in a ridiculous shark-shaped tent rather than share with Chloe. Their stubbornness and mutual avoidance reach comic—and painful—heights. Yet, small gestures (Chloe buying Fallon's favorite food, Fallon helping with camp chores) hint at the care still lingering between them. The physical proximity and forced cooperation begin to thaw the ice, but old wounds keep them from truly talking.
Detours and Dinosaur Parks
Chloe takes the scenic route, leading Fallon to oddball roadside attractions—a dinosaur park, a butterfly garden, a creepy forest of stuffed animals. Each stop is a callback to their shared history and inside jokes. Fallon resists at first, but the detours become a way for Chloe to show she remembers what Fallon loves. The girls begin to have fun again, but the tension between friendship and something more remains unresolved.
Cemetery Pilgrimage
Chloe surprises Fallon by taking her to see Haserot's Angel, a statue from Fallon's favorite horror movie. The gesture is deeply personal, and Fallon is moved. For a moment, the girls reconnect over their shared love of movies and the comfort of old rituals. But the vulnerability of the moment is fleeting, and both retreat into old patterns of avoidance and sarcasm.
Rain, Ruin, and Repair
After a night of rain soaks Fallon's tent, the girls discover the truck has been vandalized. The crisis forces them to work together with the help of two eccentric campground owners, Esther and Layla. As they scrub graffiti and repair the truck, Fallon and Chloe drop their guard, sharing laughter and even a few confessions. The teamwork rekindles their old dynamic, but the emotional distance remains.
Festival Frenzy
At the Memphis food festival, Fallon and Chloe must perform under pressure, serving demanding customers and impressing influential organizers. Their chemistry as a team is undeniable, and they fall into an easy rhythm. Jealousy flares when a cute girl flirts with Fallon, prompting Chloe to stake her claim in subtle ways. The day is a success, but the night brings new complications as they're forced to share a hotel room—and a bed.
One Bed, Two Hearts
The hotel's one-bed situation brings simmering feelings to the surface. A fight erupts over their past: Fallon reveals that Chloe was her first, and Chloe is hurt that she didn't know. Both feel used and misunderstood. The argument is raw and honest, exposing the pain and miscommunication that's kept them apart. They eventually reach a fragile truce, agreeing to focus on the business and set aside their personal drama—at least for now.
Truths and First Times
Late-night conversations lead to deeper honesty. Fallon admits her feelings and the significance of their night together; Chloe confesses her own confusion and fear of losing Fallon. They realize that both were hurt, both made mistakes, and both still care. The emotional breakthrough is cathartic, and they fall asleep side by side, the distance between them finally closing.
Closure or Something More?
After the festival, Fallon and Chloe give in to their feelings, sharing a night together that is both passionate and healing. They agree it's "closure"—a way to end their story on their own terms. But the connection between them is undeniable, and both wonder if it's really the end or a new beginning. The next morning, uncertainty lingers, and both are afraid to admit they want more.
Parental Plot Twist
Upon arriving in Dallas, Fallon and Chloe learn that their mothers orchestrated the entire road trip, hoping to force a reconciliation. The girls feel betrayed and manipulated, questioning whether their renewed bond is genuine or just a product of circumstance. The revelation shakes their fragile trust, and both retreat—Chloe by running away, Fallon by shutting down.
Running Away, Running Toward
Chloe decides to leave early, heading to her father's house in Maine to escape the emotional fallout. Fallon, realizing she can't let Chloe go without a fight, races to find her before she leaves. In a frantic, cinematic dash through the festival crowds, Fallon finally catches up to Chloe at an animal cracker stand. She confesses her true feelings, rejecting the idea of "just friends" and asking Chloe to choose her, no matter how messy or ill-timed.
No Deal, Just Us
Chloe admits she wants Fallon too, and the two share a public, joyful kiss. They agree to stop overthinking, to stop letting fear and logic dictate their relationship. Instead, they choose each other, embracing the uncertainty and imperfection of their love. The moment is triumphant—a hard-won victory over heartbreak, miscommunication, and parental interference.
After the Storm
In the aftermath, Fallon and Chloe navigate the challenges of long-distance, college, and family. Their mothers' business thrives, and the girls find ways to support each other's dreams—Fallon in film, Chloe in hospitality. Their relationship is far from perfect, but they're committed to honesty, communication, and living in the moment. The summer that began with avoidance and anger ends with hope and possibility.
Epilogue: Finding What Matters
Months later, Fallon, Chloe, and their friends reunite in Montreal, fulfilling the trip Fallon once thought she'd take without Chloe. The statue that once symbolized longing and loss now represents new beginnings. Fallon reflects on the journey—how love isn't about perfect timing or grand gestures, but about choosing each other, again and again, even when it's hard. The story ends with Fallon and Chloe together, not because fate or their mothers demanded it, but because they chose it for themselves.
Characters
Fallon
Fallon is the narrator and emotional core of the story. She's a planner, a worrier, and fiercely loyal to her family and friends. Her identity is shaped by her parents' divorce, her need to hold things together, and her love of movies—especially horror. Fallon's relationship with Chloe is both her greatest joy and deepest wound. She struggles with vulnerability, often hiding behind sarcasm and logic. Over the course of the story, Fallon learns to let go of control, embrace uncertainty, and fight for what she wants, even when it scares her.
Chloe
Chloe is Fallon's ex-best friend, ex-lover, and the daughter of Carmen, Fallon's mom's business partner. Outwardly carefree and adventurous, Chloe hides her insecurities behind humor and a "not that deep" philosophy. She's used to being the center of attention, but fears abandonment and rejection. Chloe's flightiness masks a deep longing for connection, especially with Fallon. Her journey is one of self-discovery—learning to take responsibility, communicate honestly, and choose love over fear.
Jami
Jami is Fallon's best friend and confidante. A theater kid with big dreams, she's about to leave for camp and college, making her own transition into adulthood. Jami is the voice of reason and encouragement, pushing Fallon to confront her feelings and take risks. Her own budding romance with Hideki mirrors Fallon's journey, highlighting the importance of communication and vulnerability in relationships.
Prisha
Prisha rounds out Fallon's friend group, offering a steady presence and a no-nonsense perspective. She's experienced her own heartbreaks and brings empathy to Fallon's struggles. Prisha's relationship with Kai is stable and loving, providing a contrast to Fallon and Chloe's turbulence. She encourages Fallon to seek closure and honesty.
Carmen
Carmen is Chloe's mother and Fallon's mom's business partner. She's fiercely protective of Chloe but also desperate for the girls to reconcile. Her decision to orchestrate the road trip is both a blessing and a curse, forcing the girls to confront their issues but also undermining their agency. Carmen's relationship with her own partner, Esther, models a long-term, imperfect, but loving partnership.
Fallon's Mom (Maggie)
Maggie is Fallon's mother and the co-owner of Love at First Bite. She relies on Fallon's maturity and work ethic, sometimes to an unfair degree. Maggie's desire for her daughter's happiness leads her to meddle, but her intentions are always rooted in love. She represents the challenges of single parenthood and the hope for new beginnings.
Esther and Layla
The elderly couple who run the campground where the truck is vandalized. Esther is practical and business-minded; Layla is adventurous and impulsive. Their relationship offers a model of enduring love, compromise, and acceptance. They help Fallon and Chloe repair the truck—and, symbolically, their relationship—offering advice about loving people for who they are, not who you want them to be.
Delilah
Delilah is the daughter of the Memphis festival organizer and a potential love interest for Fallon. Her interest in Fallon sparks jealousy in Chloe and forces both girls to confront their feelings. Delilah represents the possibility of moving on, but ultimately serves to clarify what Fallon truly wants.
Kai
Prisha's boyfriend, Kai is a minor but important character who models healthy masculinity and partnership. His relationship with Prisha is stable and drama-free, providing a foil to Fallon and Chloe's tumultuous dynamic.
Hideki
Jami's summer camp romance, Hideki is a symbol of new beginnings and the excitement of young love. His relationship with Jami parallels Fallon's journey, emphasizing the importance of taking risks and embracing the unknown.
Plot Devices
Forced Proximity Road Trip
The central device is the road trip: Fallon and Chloe, trapped together in an ice cream truck, must navigate physical and emotional obstacles. The journey structure allows for episodic encounters (campgrounds, festivals, detours) that mirror the stages of their relationship—avoidance, conflict, vulnerability, and reconciliation. The road trip is both literal and metaphorical, representing the messy, nonlinear path to healing and love.
Symbolic Detours and Attractions
Chloe's choice of detours—dinosaur parks, cemeteries, butterfly gardens—are not random. Each stop is a callback to shared memories, inside jokes, or personal obsessions. These attractions serve as emotional waypoints, allowing the girls to reconnect, reminisce, and confront their past. The Haserot's Angel statue, in particular, symbolizes longing, loss, and the possibility of new beginnings.
Miscommunication and Withheld Truths
The central conflict is rooted in miscommunication: Fallon hides the significance of their hookup; Chloe masks her own hurt and fear. Both girls assume the worst of each other, leading to a year of silence and pain. The gradual revelation of truths—about first times, feelings, and regrets—drives the emotional arc and ultimately enables healing.
Parental Manipulation
The twist that their mothers orchestrated the road trip adds a layer of complexity. It raises questions about agency, authenticity, and the ethics of meddling. The girls' anger at being manipulated forces them to reevaluate their choices and claim ownership of their relationship.
Closure vs. New Beginnings
The story plays with the idea of closure: Is this a last hurrah, or a new start? The characters (and readers) are kept guessing until the end, mirroring the uncertainty of real-life relationships. The epilogue's open-endedness reinforces the message that love is a choice, not a destiny.
Analysis
Melt With You is a vibrant, emotionally honest exploration of queer love, friendship, and the messy process of growing up. Jennifer Dugan uses the familiar tropes of the road trip and forced proximity to subvert expectations: instead of a simple rekindling, Fallon and Chloe's journey is fraught with miscommunication, stubbornness, and the scars of past hurt. The novel's strength lies in its refusal to offer easy answers—closure is not a single moment, but a series of choices to be vulnerable, to forgive, and to try again. The story is deeply attuned to the realities of queer adolescence: the fear of being "too much," the longing for connection, and the pressure to get it right before time runs out. Dugan's characters are flawed but lovable, and the narrative's humor and warmth balance its emotional intensity. Ultimately, the book argues that love is not about perfect timing or grand gestures, but about showing up, again and again, even when it's hard. The lesson is clear: you have to get it wrong before you can get it right, and sometimes, the best stories are the ones you choose to write together.
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Review Summary
Melt With You received mixed reviews, with an average rating of 3.48 out of 5. Some readers enjoyed the cute premise and road trip elements, while others criticized the overuse of miscommunication tropes and lack of character development. The main character, Fallon, was often described as frustrating and immature. Positive aspects included the ice cream truck setting, LGBTQ+ representation, and the author's writing style. However, many felt the plot relied too heavily on miscommunication and lacked realistic conflict resolution.